Brian-Plot

Plot Point	Your story info
1. Self-revelation, need, and desire	1.Their selfishness has lead to the destruction of their community. Their desire is self preservation and their need is community.
2. Ghost and story world	2. Distant planet
3. Weakness and need	3.Lack of acceptance and selfishness. Needs community.
4. Inciting event	4. Sunset and the collapse of bird and others
5. Desire	5.Survival
6. Ally or allies	6. The darker green creature and the creatures in the area
7. Opponent and/or mystery	7.Darkness and the mortality of collapse
8. Fake-ally opponent	8.Allies become opponents when the main character needs food.
9. First revelation and decision: Changed desire and motive	9.From carefree life to a fight for the survival of the pair
10. Plan	10. Find the star
11. Opponent’s plan and main counterattack	11.Fatigue and hopelessness
12. Drive	12.Self preservation
13. Attack by ally	13. Friend attacks the main character out of desperation
14. Apparent defeat	14.The collapse of their friend and their near collapse
15. Second revelation and decision: Obsessive drive, changed desire and motive	15.Desire moves to self preservation at the cost of “humanity” and friends
16. Audience revelation	16.These are animals with animal instincts
17. Third revelation and decision	17.
18. Gate, gauntlet, visit to death	18.
19. Battle	19.The creature struggles to remain conscious and consumes friend
20. Self-revelation	20.Selfishness has lead to this point and they can either continue or die.
21. Moral decision	21. Continue killing in order to survive or die
22. New equilibrium	22. They continue killing out of self preservation
Other?	??