Plot Point Your story info
1. Self-revelation, need, and desire 1. “I want to make the most of life”; stop closing self off to others and discover passions; to feel better/recover
2. Ghost and story world 2. Depression and hopelessness; dream world
3. Weakness and need 3. Avoidant; face reality and rely on others more; accident leads her to be treated in hospital for injuries
4. Inciting event 4. Wakes up in dream world
5. Desire 5. Physical and mental recovery
6. Ally or allies 6. Friend in the dream world, family members
7. Opponent and/or mystery 7. Elderly man
8. Fake-ally opponent 8.
9. First revelation and decision: Changed desire and motive 9.
10. Plan 10.
11. Opponent’s plan and main counterattack 11. Encourage MC to continue recovery before he dies – carefully talk to her and share about his own experiences
12. Drive 12.
13. Attack by ally 13.
14. Apparent defeat 14.
15. Second revelation and decision: Obsessive drive, changed desire and motive 15.
16. Audience revelation
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17. Third revelation and decision 17.
18. Gate, gauntlet, visit to death 18.
19. Battle 19.
20. Self-revelation 20.
21. Moral decision 21. Returns to her real life
22. New equilibrium 22. Realizes the potential for her to discover other passions in life
Other? ??