THE FIRST DRAFT – Fooshie: Secrets Revealed It’s been a very long time since the Fall of the Fooshies. While Junior, Lightning, and Crosshairs still fight those that oppose good, they still have trouble coping with the loses. Especially Junior. However, the remaining Fooshies are…

Story Script: The scene starts with a simple zoom in on buildings, beautiful class structures you would see in bigger cities. The camera glides the over the city and glances over the houses and stores in the city. People are laughing, and the noon crisp…

This is an unfinished first draft. I wanted to have something uploaded before class today at least.   BEGINNING   Opens with Sylvius alone, getting ready for the day. He writes in his journal which shows the audience what the time/date system looks like for…

Owen Savage Story Draft    It was another day in the life of Richie, the whistle of the teapot pierces the air as Rich torches the end of last night’s cigarette, drops his lighter, slides into his slippers and runs a come through his hair…

a young teenage girl (MC = main character) rides a bus home from school. it’s downpouring, so the roads are extremely slippery. she frowns while looking out at the rainy roads and listening to music through earbuds. there’s still a ways left to get home,…

Part 1 BAM!, it all started way to fast.  Without any warning, the reactor went off like a mega bomb. Workers got hurt, I wasn’t sure how bad it was, I didn’t care I knew what I needed to do: I needed to get out…

The story starts with James and his business partner and best friend, Carl, on their yacht.  They are playing a round of pool with drinks in their hand when Carl mentions how he failed to prank James earlier today.  He asked the captain to fake…

The planet was mostly barren except for a few rock outcroppings. In the sky, the two stars that had started their journey across the sky long before anyone remembered drifted ever closer to the horizon. The surface was teeming with life. Bird-like creatures danced through…

[aesop_chapter title=”Chapter 1″ subtitle=”It Begins” bgtype=”color” full=”on” video_autoplay=”play_scroll” bgcolor=”#6b1a1a” revealfx=”off” overlay_revealfx=”off”] The story starts off with a young adult named Cole living out his normal life. He lives in a small town as a farmer. Then hes approached by a mysterious woman. She introduces herself…

Writing the First Draft Using the past Journal assignments you’ve written about your story, in other words, the Premise, Seven Steps of Story Structure, Character Web, write a thoughtful but quick and rough first draft of your story.  Your job is to try to find…