Visual: I added more images and began to change the font and background color of the story board.

Content: I finished the story adding a final ending and multiple endings where the user must restart the entire game.

Plot: The plot of my story is simple yet I feel it gives the user a spooky feeling while playing it. The uncertainty of the doors entered to get out of the building adds suspense.

Character: Since you are the character, you will get to choose your fate in the story. Give up or keep trying until you reach the end.