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Scene Work

Review scene for your classmates as follows Read scene Give emotional feedback as you go (haha, what was that? yikes, etc), so they know which parts had an effect Ask questions about information you need but don’t yet have; then tell writer if the info was need to know could learn later incidental Does this […]

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Game Design Process

The Game Design Process There is no such thing as a “standard” game design document, and for good reason. It would be insane to try to fit an interactive fiction adventure and a Tetris-like puzzle into the same mold. However, all forms of entertainment do have a certain number of characteristics in common, and over

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Story Feedback 2

If you’re like most writers, you’re thrilled. You’ve just poured your heart and soul into this and you want some sweet affirmation after all your hard work. So as you share your work, you ask a seemingly innocent question: “Is it good?” This question may seem harmless enough. But this is a dangerous question, and

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Story Feedback

Part A:  How to give feedback 1.  The shit sandwich The shit sandwich[i] is the most important tool you need to know when giving criticism.  Praise – Critique – Praise.  This works anywhere:  office reviews, school reports, conversations with your lover, anywhere. First, start by saying something positive.  Anything positive.  You can’t make something up (that

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