Here’s the first three pages of my script for the new intro to Myriad. Jolene said the first attempt lacked a feeling of conflicted or strong tension that I wanted to convey, so I reworked it to pick up slightly later in the story once Mira and Clayton reached the lowest point in the island right before finding an unconscious Melody. This is ideally going to be a podcast in its final form, but for now here is the script:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Gqm57G7oAz0_Q7xmDtVJbchjHdCTK07IhSOWFeN9eWM/edit?usp=sharing