1 thought on “Task 3 – Brian Ellsmore”

  1. What do you mean by, “More powerful than world leaders?” That feels too vague a descriptor with a lot of leeway for interpretation. Do you mean they rule the world? Or what else? You also might need to think through articulating your Tone more clearly. I’m not really sure what that world your describing would be like, how do these changes change how the world feels?

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