Very impressive and professional layout, it helps instill confidence in a potential audience that sees it that the person authoring this world is taking the project seriously and intends to see it through. Is this a post apocalypse of our own world? Or is it an alternate modern world with a different history to ours? That could be a mystery left up to interpretation and if so ignore me, lol. Also scanning through what you have on some of the characters and was happy to see some lgbtq+ rep, always a good sign in my book!
I noticed a few places you could tighten the prose on what you’ve written in chapter 1 so far but that is more nitpicky minutiae, if you want me to give it feel free to messge.
Very impressive and professional layout, it helps instill confidence in a potential audience that sees it that the person authoring this world is taking the project seriously and intends to see it through. Is this a post apocalypse of our own world? Or is it an alternate modern world with a different history to ours? That could be a mystery left up to interpretation and if so ignore me, lol. Also scanning through what you have on some of the characters and was happy to see some lgbtq+ rep, always a good sign in my book!
I noticed a few places you could tighten the prose on what you’ve written in chapter 1 so far but that is more nitpicky minutiae, if you want me to give it feel free to messge.