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Ghost

Part One The Kingdom

The battle raged around them. Possessed creatures lunged at them, only to be fended off by a burst of light or the slash of a sword. Sylvius turned abruptly to check on his group, taking a headcount and trying to assess the amount of danger that they each were in. Azrael, of course, seemed to be doing fine, if not a bit too enthusiastic about his spells. He always seemed to get more aggressive than the rest in fights. Aliyah and Sage appeared to have teamed up, Aliyah in her dragon form. 

Nodding to himself that they all seemed to be handling themselves just fine, Sylvius returned his focus to his own self. He clutched his sword tightly in his grip and swung it elegantly at a monster which had been approaching him, vanquishing it. He hated doing it–he knew these monsters weren’t in control of themselves, but there wasn’t much else to be done in this situation. They were here to rescue stranded people from their kingdom and bring them to the safe haven. He continued on to a nearby building, heading inside a few steps to look around and see if there might be anyone hiding.

What he found was something beyond description. It was a sort of…dark mass, floating in the air, covered in blinking, pulsating eyes. There appeared to be some sort of beak at the center, somewhat raven-like. Am I…Looking at Corvus itself? Sylvius’ heart rate picked up and his yellow eyes widened. He began taking a step backwards, wanting to leave quietly, but something stopped him. It felt like he wasn’t in control of his own limbs. No matter how hard he willed it, he couldn’t get his body to move. It was then that he heard his brother’s voice behind him.

“Sylvius!” Azrael called out desperately, quickly being held back by Sage’s grip on his arm. 

“Azrael, stay back!” Sage growled as she tugged him away from the entrance of the house. Aliyah landed gracefully behind them and hurried over, turning into her human form once again. When she saw the situation, her stomach lurched. No, not him…

The Scourge seemed to have realized who it was dealing with. Sylvius felt an immense pain in his head greater than any pain he’d felt before, and he found himself crying out in pain. His hands clutched his silver hair, wishing hopelessly for this torture to stop, until suddenly, it did. Everything just…stopped, and Sylvius’s vision got dim and blurry. In moments, he was unconscious. 

“No!” Azrael howled as his little brother fell to the ground, and he lurched forward to try and get to his side, only for Sage to pull him back again. 

“Are you an idiot? Can’t you see what’s happening? You can’t get close to him!” She reprimanded, fixing her stern but caring gaze on her teammate. “You’ll be killed!” 

“No, I won’t!” Azrael rounded on her. “If anyone’s familiar with this thing, it’s me, you got that? Now let me go!

It was then that Sylvius stirred from his unconsciousness, giving Azrael a moment of false hope. But when Sylvius rose, he wasn’t himself anymore. His eyes had been glazed over black, vacant. His movements were sluggish and stiff, almost as if he were being puppeted. He lifted his head slowly to face who he now saw as his opponents. Suddenly, without warning, the shell of Sylvius lunged forward and slashed his sword in Azrael’s direction. Azrael just barely had time to cast a ward to protect himself, still suffering a nasty gash in his arm that stung horribly as the ward shattered on impact.

“Sylvius, stop! Fight it!” Azrael cried out, casting another protection spell around the group.

“Get back! We have to regroup. We can’t fight him while he’s like this.” Sage commanded.

“We can’t let him out of here or he’ll have room to shift forms,” Aliyah spoke up, her voice wavering as she watched Sylvius throw hit after hit at Azrael’s barrier. “Azrael, can you seal him inside this building?”

“No! I already told you, I am not leaving him!” Azrael snapped back over his shoulder. But with every hit of Sylvius’s sword, Azrael’s barrier spell weakened. He couldn’t keep this up forever. But they couldn’t be right! There had to be another way. 

“Just long enough for us to escape,” Aliyah continued, her tone urgent but gentle. “We have to go. You know he’ll be okay on his own; he can handle himself. If we get too injured to fight, we won’t be able to come back and save him. The Scourge will release him once we are no longer here, I’m sure of it.”

“You- I-” Azrael started, clenching his teeth and uttering curse words beneath his breath. Sage was growing visibly impatient with him, which made Aliyah’s heart race further. What they really didn’t need right now was Azrael to lose control. But, thankfully, and only moments before the barrier was destroyed by Sylvius, Azrael made up his mind. He sent a surge of energy hurdling towards his younger brother, just enough to push him back, away from the door. 

“Get out! Move!” He barked, ushering the other two out the door along with himself. He slammed and latched the door behind him, then pressed his palm against the lock. A shimmer of purple light glinted beneath his hand, and that light spread to encompass the entire building. By now the monsters from outside were on them again, and they had very little time.

Once outside, Aliyah shifted back into her dragon form and Sage and Azrael climbed onto her back. Sapphire blue wings raised like massive walls around the two before rocketing downwards, sending the three climbing up into the sky, to disappear within the clouds.

Part Two The Sanctuary

“This is all your fault!” Azrael exclaimed with rage, throwing a finger in Sage’s direction. “If you had just let me save him, he would be here with us right now. You act like you know us all but you don’t! You don’t know Sylvius like I do! I could have pulled him out of there if you’d only let me!” Tears of hurt and anger streamed down his face, tears that he was unable to control. 

“I saved your life!” Sage countered, stepping closer to Azrael, her shoulders tense and one hand balled into a fist. “I won’t have you turn all of the blame on me. If it wasn’t for me stopping you, none of us would be here. The Scourge would have killed us all, probably including Sylvius! Don’t you understand this was the only way to keep all of us alive? If you don’t stop acting like a child throwing a temper tantrum, we’ll never get Sylvius back!” She shouted each word, allowing bitter anger to overtake her for a moment without realizing. She was boiling with rage at Azrael. The only thing to pull her out of it was the sound of a sniffle behind her. She turned to see that…Aliyah was crying, quietly to herself. Sage’s angry gaze softened and she let out a sigh. 

“We’ll get him back,” She reminded Azrael, also partially directed at Aliyah now. “We will. Knowing Sylvius, he’s probably already recovered and on his way back to us.”

Breakdown The seven story steps

Weakness and need – Azrael refuses to leave Sylvius behind even when it becomes the best option for survival. He needs to be able to think more clearly with the help of his group so that they can rethink a better strategy.

Desire – To bring Sylvius home safely

Opponent – The Scourge, Sylvius, Sage

Plan – The plan was originally that the group was going to the kingdom to rescue those left behind. The plan changes to become leaving Sylvius behind and regrouping in order to return and save him.

Battle – verbal conflict between Azrael and Sage, trying to convince Azrael to leave Sylvius behind for now. Physical conflict between Azrael and Sylvius since Sylvius was possessed by The Scourge.

Self-Revelation – Azrael realizes that Sylvius with the powers of The Scourge is far too much for them to handle, and that they must retreat.

New Equilibrium – The group is now without Sylvius, and must figure out how to get him back.

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Ghost (Draft)

Chapter 1 the first chapter

BEGINNING

Opens with Sylvius alone, getting ready for the day. He writes in his journal which shows the audience what the time/date system looks like for them, and how the Sylvans are keeping track of the time they’ve spent underground. Sylvius has been underground for nearly his entire life, and has very few memories of the above ground world. 

He leaves his room and begins to clean up after his brother, who has left things in places they shouldn’t be. He bumps into Aliyah in the common room, they exchange a few words, and she asks where Azrael is. Sylvius says he knows exactly where he is.

Scene from the night before:

Azrael is still at the bar, talking up his friend Codias who is serving drinks. Cody makes a comment about how he’s had enough, and Azrael humorously convinces him to pour another before the bar closes for the evening. There’s a brief scene of some Sylvan hooligans shapeshifting in the pub, which Cody has to kick out because shifting forms isn’t allowed in restaurants. 

Azrael comments on how he was “not able to score tonight”, and how he can’t go home sober, or not alone at least. Cody ends up walking him back to his room. 

back to the previous scene, Sylvius tells Aliyah he needs to speak privately with his brother. Bangs on Azrael’s door and shouts that it’s time to get up and get to work with the plans for the day. Imagery implies that Cody stayed the night with him. Azrael lazily dresses himself and meets Sylvius in the common room. Aliyah waits outside. 

Sylvius reprimands Azrael over his drunken laziness. Azrael acts distant, not wanting to hear it from him again. He responds by pulling an advanced fighting move on his younger brother, knocking him to the floor. He tells Sylvius that he shouldn’t be so aggressive, because he didn’t live through the Scourge like Azrael did.

cut to a flashback of The Scourge occurring for the first time. It possesses people and makes them do terrible things, and it also agitates the local wildlife which happens to be monster-like creatures. Azrael and Sylvius lost their parents, and Azrael lost his wife. Sylvius was only a few years old. Azrael’s quick thinking rescues his baby brother and takes him far away. They meet with other refugees who find them, and they find their escape route underground. The brothers are the only surviving members of the royal family.

cut back, Sylvius leaves the common room with a bruise on his face from the confrontation. Aliyah asks how the conversation went, sees his face, and says she assumes it didn’t go well. Sylvius brushes it off and the two leave together to head for the meeting room where they will plan strategies.

After they’re gone, Cody looks out the door carefully and then leaves back for his own room. He has an emotional moment alone; the reasons why are left up to the reader to speculate.

Chapter 2 the second chapter

THE HUMANS

A scout team reports back stating that human naval ships have docked on the island. The king and prince go out with a group to investigate, and are met with immediate hostility. The person in charge has one of the background characters killed out of fear. They have never seen Sylvans before and think it’s some secret military organization. They want to take Sylvius in for interrogation and leverage, but The Scourge attacks before they can. Most of the humans are wiped out, and those remaining are forced to join the Sylvans underground.

Sylvius welcomes them cautiously and designates a portion of the shelter for the remaining humans. He has a conversation with Sage about how things work around here.

SAGE

Sage was a higher up in the military force of humans. She ends up hanging around the main group (Sylvius, Azrael, Aliyah) and becomes friends with them. 

The group has a gathering at one point, in one of the bars in the underground sanctuary. They all laugh and have a good time despite the struggles they’re going through. This brings them closer together.

Sage teaches them all a lesson in human combat. They all have a training session with her.

Sage talks with Aliyah about her feelings of inadequacy, and gives her some confident advice.

Working with the humans now, Sylvius, Azrael, and Aliyah get together with Sage to discuss the next rescue mission. They have to send a troop aboveground to rescue handfuls at a time of those who were left behind. Sylvius insists on going this time, which Azrael discourages. In the end all four of them end up going, but Sylvius gets left behind due to The Scourge possessing him. The other three can’t do anything to stop it unless they kill him, which they don’t want to do, so they leave to regroup. Aliyah and Sage have to try really hard to convince Azrael to leave him.

Azrael explodes over this when they return, and Sage has to pull him together so that they can make a plan to get Sylvius back.

When they finally go to get Sylvius back, he’s a mess. Not only is he now dealing with the mental and emotional aftermath of being possessed, but in his mind, they abandoned him, and he remains bitter for what he had to suffer through alone.

Sylvius and Azrael are getting ready for battle, backs turned to each other, having a heated argument in almost complete silence. Neither has the energy to raise their voice, but vicious words are thrown. They enter the battlefield with unresolved problems.

FINAL FACE OFF

Armed and ready, the Sylvans and the humans march in to the old settlement, now overrun. Weapons brandished, they start fighting against possessed creatures and people, careful to only knock out any possessed individuals and not kill them.

At one point near the end, The Scourge possesses Azrael and goes after Sage. Sylvius fights Azrael and attempts to knock him unconscious but can’t seem to do it. Azrael is too skilled. The Scourge, through Azrael, tells Sylvius that he needs to kill Azrael, or else it will make Azrael kill Sage.

In the moment of truth, Sylvius is given no choice and shoots a fatal blow at his brother, who, before The Scourge leaves him, it makes him kill Sage anyways. Azrael is conscious for his final moments and apologizes to Sylvius for not being a better brother. Sylvius stops him and apologizes himself before his brother dies.

Sylvius and Aliyah are left alone to lead the settlement. All they really have is each other now. She has to be his voice of clarity and reason and talk him down from ending his own life. Somebody refers to him as “king” and he shouts at them.

The story ends with Sylvius staring in his bathroom mirror. He stares into his own eyes, not recognizing the person behind them. He punches the mirror out, shakes the blood from his hand, and draws his weapon. The final scene is of him sobbing and holding it, leaving what happens ambiguous for the reader to decide.

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