| Plot Point | Your story info |
| 1. Self-revelation, need, and desire | 1. Junior fights for good, keeps his valley from going into complete chaos, and wants to prove he can lead |
| 2. Ghost and story world | 2. The world feels almost like a shell of it’s former self. Evil runs wild as heroes are rarely seen. |
| 3. Weakness and need | 3. Junior self doubts himself, has a blind faith, and wants to know more of his past |
| 4. Inciting event | 4. Junior gets a tip on where he can look to know more about his past |
| 5. Desire | 5. Junior wants to pursue this tip |
| 6. Ally or allies | 6. Junior’s best friend and mentor, who was Junior’s father’s best friend |
| 7. Opponent and/or mystery | 7. Evil creatures that roam the land and where do they come from. |
| 8. Fake-ally opponent | 8. Junior gets saved by a mysterious stranger |
| 9. First revelation and decision: Changed desire and motive | 9. The mysterious stranger tells Junior that there are lies in his past and tells him how to find the truth. Junior wants to know the truth. |
| 10. Plan | 10. Junior’s Plan: Track down the clues to their past and show that he can lead. |
| 11. Opponent’s plan and main counterattack | 11. After some close calls, Junior’s mentor tells Junior that this is madness and that they’re getting no where. He tells Junior to stop trying and reveals that he’s tried before and that nothing they discover will ever change the past. |
| 12. Drive | 12. Junior bound and determined abandons his team and joins up with the mysterious stranger after being saved by him again. |
| 13. Attack by ally | 13. The mysterious stranger attacks Junior after he finds out that the stranger has been holding Junior’s father (Griffen) as a prisoner |
| 14. Apparent defeat | 14. Junior and Griffen get the upper hand on the stranger. |
| 15. Second revelation and decision: Obsessive drive, changed desire and motive | 15. The mysterious stranger reveals he is Damian, another member of Junior’s race and one of Griffen’s friends. On top of that another member of Junior’s race arrives, saves Damian, and relentlessly attacks Griffen. Junior helps to defend Griffen. |
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16. Audience revelation
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16. Griffen is responsible for the destruction of their race. |
| 17. Third revelation and decision | 17. Junior gets separated from everyone and finds a key part to his past. |
| 18. Gate, gauntlet, visit to death | 18. Junior has to get through some trials. Griffen is about to be defeated. |
| 19. Battle | 19. Damian and friend attack Griffen and Junior’s friends, while Junior joins in later after finding out a way to defeat the two. |
| 20. Self-revelation | 20. Junior learns the truth. |
| 21. Moral decision | 21. Junior casts out his father for his crimes. |
| 22. New equilibrium | 22. Junior wants to right his father’s wrongs and sets out with his team to hopefully end this evil’s reign. |
| Other? | ?? |
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